Tommyrawr's Reviews

[Forcebar]

Surprising...

This game is strangely addictive, with a clear objective that's challenging, this game could kill hours to those who are patient and determined, unlike me.

Though, it has to be said, it's quite ugly-looking, and perhaps you could have varied the speed of all the bars and perhaps give it some sort of subtle background.

[Click Bang Pow!]

Has potential.

Pros:
* Simple controls
* Clear objective
* Not impossible

Cons:
* No sounds
* No pause button
* Only one death pose
* Difficulty increases are too subtle

Possible improvements:
* Appropriate sounds
* Pause feature
* Extra death poses
* Magazine limit with reload feature
* Increased difficulty jumps

[Xtreme 5 Min Shootemup]

Cool.

Straight into the action, with simple controls (understatement) and a clear objective, anyone can get into this game, especially if you're a fan of Tyrian!

However, it has little replayability and the graphics could do with a slight improvement.

[Prawn of the Slums]

Quite kewl.

I have yet to see District 9, but from what I've seen of the trailers, it certainly seems worth watching.

It's not a bad drawing by any means, but I do have a few suggestions that you may (or may not) want to take up for future creations, such as using a sharper pencil for the outlines, and also perhaps trying to smudge your shaded areas where necessary using the tip of your finger (unless your finger's wet, then that's a bad idea). This would help disguise all the apparent pencil strokes.

Hope this review's helpful, and keep at it!

KrustyJuggler responds:

it was meant to be done in dull penicl. when i use sharpened ones, i usually press too hard and in makes an un eraseable mark, and it looks awful. plus i wanted to make him seem worn and dull because he is from the slums, and i did smudge the shaded areas quite a bit. but i mean, come on man, only a 7 out of 10? i put a lot of work into this.

[Martian]

Nice.

When I first saw this, it immediately reminded me of the Scarabs from Odd World, and if that means nothing to you... just know that it's a good thing.

Great choice of colours, and very well shaded to give it quite a lot of depth.

Keep it up.

MrCreeep responds:

aw i remember that game, i only played the first one on the PS1, it was just the demo but it was great